this was very interesting, but then i saw bob ross. and i lost it! XD
this was very interesting, but then i saw bob ross. and i lost it! XD
would have liked to hear a little better voice acting. perhaps its just the quality i did not like. better recording device perhaps? humorous joke though. did not see that coming really. X3
interesting dream you had there. though i would like to see a little more detail into the drawings of the animation. i enjoyed this. please keep working on the quality and im excited to hear more interesting dreams u or people you know have had lol.
having a bit of trouble getting the line work right. i can do it on paper, but my tablet seems to create a zillion anchor points when i just wanted to draw a circle. ive alreaghty tried smoothing, and using pen tool. u know how i can fix the lines?
i really enjoy your drawing style. also. is this a refernce to something?
Yeah, it's from Guild Wars 2.
Glad you liked the art, though, haha!
this was pretty good. GREAT WORK WITH THE 3D ANIMATION. the joke at the end was pretty funny. but the voice acting was a little bland. perhaps just no energy when recording that day? but reguardless. i enjoyed it.
I'm not a fantastic voice actor but I could definitely do better, I hope in future animations I can not only perform better but sell the performance and animate to it as well :) Thank you!
whoever sang in that video... OMFG!!! you have such an amazing vouce! BEAUTIFUL!!! <3 lol
Ellie's voice actor, Ashley Johnson.
as this is your first animation. i feel bad for rating it so low, its a good idea, and story. but i have suggestions for improvement. first i think you should try different perspective angles. like when the characters are talking, you have them close up instead of so far away in a field. and when they fight close up a bit too. have the perspective follow what you want us to see, but remember to leave juuuust enough room so we can enjoy the scenery from time to time too. I also recommend you use more than one song, use multiple songs for each scene to help get a feel for the emotion you wish us to feel as we watch. i also suggest some sound effects and perhaps voice acting? the voice acting is not fully needed. but its one way to go :) Good Luck!! I hope i helped and did not offend.
Your rating is enough, I already know, this is my first, the rating is worthy..
Yes, I already have a thread about what you suggested.. :)
Areas I think that I need to improve:
1. Make the text longer so that one could read it.
2. Using Symbols(Graphic) for the animation.
3. Using Camera Movements.
4. Some more hard-work..
5. Different (suitable) music and SFXs for different scenes..
Thanks your your suggestions. :)
This was quite etertaining, but the audio could use some work.
We're glad you enjoyed. We will give the audio a closer inspection. Thank you.
i can definitely see the eddsworld inspired animation and art style here! loved it, though the music could use some work, perhaps :3 good woik though! lol
Thanks, this is the first time I did all the music, I'm not a musician, but I think I have to improve on that in my next few animations.
Eddsworld is amazing :D
well, it wasnt the best thing ive ever seen, but i enjoyed it kinda. the characters were kinda rememberable in their own way. making us choose what happens was interesting, but maybe too simplified endings? all and all, i do see a lot of potential here! plz dont let mah low rating turn you offa animating or posting things. takes time to make things what others expect. keep it up! ill keep an eye out for your work as i see great things in the future :3 also. the dial up part and the button part both cracked me up a lil. X3
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